The sun stealthily peeps from behind the hill
Tearing the black gown of the night
From his face golden rays spill
Brightening the Earth in dazzling light
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At the bank of a quiet river watching beauty of nature in seclusion makes a poetess care free for a few moments and the beautiful thoughts come like a pleasant flow of river or a mild blow of wind and piece of beauty, a work of art is created, a joy for the poetess and her readers as well.
A cocktail of nature served so beautifully as serenity flows over me as I read such superb lines!
Bursting with beauty. Well done my friend.
I wonder how you have written so much about sights and sounds of morning. Poem is perfectly rhymed which is increasing its appeal, I am wondering is it a poem or a painting, wonderful, thanks for sharing :)
A morning of bright sunshine warms the heart and soul of all. Enjoyed the lovely description of nature's bounteous beauty. A blessing for all of us. Thank you for sharing this wonderful poem.
Morning brings the joy of living and that serene state of mind when every thing looks beautiful but only few can express it as well as you do. Beautiful poem. A pleasure to read.
Really this poetess ravel our soul to serene nature in its hidden beauty I feel Heaven in this bounteous Nature is hid With so much sweetness and serenity around I would like to imagine all my cares fled Being here so lost in the beauty that surround!
Where nagging thoughts never invade Heaven is found there to recede and enjoy the serenity of the surroundings. This poem with carefully weaved lines of rhythm is a thing of beauty.filling the reader with joy. I enjoyed the poem. Thank you.
Beautiful poem Valsa, with many very inspired lines that paint a lovely picture.
Life of an integral part of a brilliant day pulsates here and the abundance of attributions of the paraphernalia of the advancing day has been meticulously synchronized here... As a poem dedicated to the mild Sun and the mild mid summer Morning of the first half of February in India, this write is an amazing lyrical feast to the readers who can feel the chimes of the music portrayed within the form. Thank you for sharing this fine poem madam Valsa.
O holy virgin! O radiant morning, I salute you, your heavenly glory........for life comes alive with your blushing......... Valsa............very inspiring poem...........
A Wonderful poem Valsa. You have captured the nature's beauty in a very fantastic way. While reading your poem, I felt I am somewhere standing in the midst of a beautiful village, especially to savour Morning Glory with Koel's sweet song. To enjoy the nature, chirping of birds, humming of bees, especially in morning, cool breeze blowing with only the sweet sounds flowing is really the charming way to enjoy the nature. Free from this traffic life, no sounds of horns, free from all pollution. Really loved reading this bounteous Nature... Thanks a lot for the valuable and sincere comments for my poem..How should I comment for your poems?
heaven is here, to be seen, to be touched, to be felt. a soul stirring poem Valsa.
Morning glory is my favorite flower its like its filled fully surrounding my house and me super feel of it 😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘