Miss You Dad! ! Poem by Sakshi Narang

Miss You Dad! !

Rating: 4.3


The memory is still crisp and sharp,
I suddenly woke up when the phone rang.

It was 4 in the morning, world was sleeping,
I had no idea, your soul was leaving.

When the phone rang, I knew I suffered a loss,
But I was unaware that my father was gone.

The worst I could imagine was you on a hospital bed,
I hope I would get to do a last chit chat.

But you had already lost the battle, without much struggle.
And I was left there with my thought to mumble,

Should I thank the universe for taking you away without much pain?
Or cry for your unspoken words that were disdain?

I wanted to tell you dad,
That even your bleeding finger could to make my eyes swell,
Or how the news of your broken foot made me wail?

Now you have gone, I can only repent
I have realised without a father what life meant.

Miss You Dad! !
Wednesday, March 6, 2019
Topic(s) of this poem: death,father,father daughter,loss
POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
I recently lost my Dad. He was an alcoholic and we were not on good terms since many years. Losing him make me go through guilt trips. I wish I would have given him ample time. The loss is irreparable.
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Jazib Kamalvi 19 April 2019

A good start with a nice poem, Sakshi Narang. You may like to read my poem, Love And Iust. Thank you.

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Chinedu Dike 06 March 2019

Deep sad feeling of loss nicely brought forth with clarity of thought and mind. Very heartfelt. Thanks for sharing Sakshi.

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Sakshi Narang 07 March 2019

Thanks. Sometimes, you cannot control the flow of emotions and words come to you effortlessly.

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Umang Sadhu 06 March 2019

Beautiful poem, nicely written.

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Sakshi Narang 07 March 2019

Thank you. You are the first reader.

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