Wednesday, January 11, 2006

Maybe (I Want To Fall Desperately In Love With Someone Who Cares) Comments

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Maybe you'll be there tomorrow
Yeah, maybe
Maybe you'll walk up to me
To compliment my bright outfit
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Lara W.A
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Ivy Christou 23 January 2006

this is a great come back Anies.. hopeless romantic too? well maybe our dreams may come true, you never know. keep posting! HBH

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John Tiong Chunghoo 23 January 2006

you are a real poet! !

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glen still 12 January 2006

Anies...i thought the opening lines ' Maybe you'll be there tomorrow Yeah, maybe' said it all...so matter of factly, yet without hope! Wishing for that thing we all feel desolate without...and it's always just a 'MAYBE'. Great emotion...thanks for posting... glen b@peace

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Linda Hepner 12 January 2006

A long wait for your next poem, but this was well worth it! Your voice comes over plaintively yet strong and the words stream. Loved it, Anies!

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