Thursday, March 1, 2007

(m) (01) (Terror) After The Bombing Comments

Rating: 2.9

The wind laments
The birds twitter in a hush
Mourning the last nights event
Burnt lawns that were lush
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Renu Rakheja a.k.a Tranquil Ocean
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Geoff Warden 01 March 2007

Well T.O. after I remove some shrapnal from my.......this was written so well, that it takes the readr right into the thick of things........

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Stunningly penned up keen observation TO. Masterful. t x

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Original Unknown Girl 01 March 2007

Wow TO, this is a really powerful poem, haunting imagery. A really tragic story told tenderly. HG: -) xx

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