Tuesday, May 26, 2009

Love Story Comments

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Fingers entwined, Joined hand in hand
In a lovers embrace they stand
To be together forever that is their will
Praying and wishing time would stay still
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Jenny Bevan
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Little Hatila ;) 03 August 2009

'When that day comes their hearts will be one they will prove to the world that love cannot be undone' i believe that too, one day comes i am gonna prove for the whole world that love will never ever be undone.....very touching....10 Hataw

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Kesav Easwaran 26 May 2009

yes; true and sincere love always provides that much assurance...lovely piece, Jenny...well worded lines...10

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