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Lost in a world, that scares me to death,
Lost in a crowd, I'm losing my breath.
Lost as a boy, lost as a man,
I need to grow up, don't think I can.
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An amazingly beautiful poem! Perhaps it speaks for me and also for many others...'Lost to kindness, lost to love, Lost in a sky, like a new-born dove. Lost in thought, which I shouldn't do, It winds me up, I can't get through.'
Lost in a straight world, and I am gay, Lost now, for what to say, Lost in boredom, think I'll leave. There's a lot in life I need to achieve. great poem; for such a great 10+++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++
beautiful poem that got me emotional... even though I am female I understand where you are coming from... for I live a non-straight life... but your poem has spoken to me...in ways I needed keep writing
An emotional sad feelings filled poem...leaves a reader with a lot to talk about.10++++
i can totally relate to this, but i believe we all find our way in the end
Where are you now? ...That is always also my question...Very deeply portrayed...I do salute your courage and openess! A big 10 for you, Dan...you can also visit my Shattered. Thanks, Cheryl
a very sad and emotionally charged poem with a knowing ending?
Outstanding! ! ! Poem! So Moving! So Deeply Heart Touching! ! ! Thank You so much for sharing this write! ! !
it's low tone draws out my compassionate side but, the end tells me they don't stay down for long as they still hve the spark of grit and will inside of them. May their rise be quicker than the fall
Loaded with looseness is this creative, candid and compelling composition!
Beautiful, I hate that there is so much sadness, I just want to give you a hug.. but the strength is in the struggle and in Your ability to verbalize and identify your feelings. Such a beautiful poem.
lovely but very sad.. very good with words and expressing yourself i like it alot.
Fluid movement - nice rhythm - one is glad to arrive at the end stanza which clinches the poetic passion and overrides the man's deception. Perhaps it could be called a poem of Hope. Nice work. Panmelys
The more desperate u are, more hopeful u become....nice write up
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4/17/2025 12:57:50 AM # 1.0.0
Lost to comfort, all kind words, Lost to advice, it isn't heard. Lost to those who really care, All these people, always there.