Little crystal dewdrop
Trembling daughter of the morning,
On the tip of a leaf of thyme
What are you doing on the hill?
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A nice creation, well conceived and nicely penned. Thanks for sharing Reva.
A very elegant little poem! Loved the poetic expression! Liked the second stanza most! ......10
When the valley still sleeps What are you doing on the hill? Wow, a nice drop of dew on the soft heart of the reader too, so nicely placed. You are superb. Thanks for the sharing this lovely poem dear Reva. 10+++++