Like A Butterfly Comments

A beautiful poem, a pleasure to read, thank you.

a nice thought, well penned. Thank you for sharing.

nice poem and i loved it! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! !

How intriguing this is. I wrote one: We watch the lazy butterfly - Yet how different it turned out to be. Read mine - Sunlight's World - Adeline

Bursting with beauty like a buterfly! Well done my friend! 10/10

very beautiful the wording behind the butterfly was brilliant keep it up man love to see more your friend Kharon march

You wrote that so well that I became the butterfly... Well done...

Really it's a great poem/ graceful write... It brings me a wonderful picture in mind. Top marks! ! ! ! ! ! ,10+++

very beautiful poem ~~^^~~

a really beautiful poem!

I like this poem Romeo, nice job! I can picture the butterfly in the sky and the wind in the trees!

beautiful. for a second i felt the butterfly with me. dont wast ur talent.

Metaphors are well defined through the spirit of the poem. When ones existence compared with the wind... the soul here talks as its unseen existence as infinity where life and death are useless factor to be considered. The perfect position of the soul...poet touches that height of imagining such reality. Tree comes out from the conception of Dual existence of Self, explained as Creator and Creation in lower depth of philosophy....But butterfly is unique illustration of colourful life the poet spends through light and shadow of eternal journey to meet that absolute.... Live long...fight more to cultivate light.... Regards, pranab

a beautiful poem tat touches my heart and feels as if the butterfly is with me