Tuesday, December 21, 2021

Life, Life - Ii Comments

Rating: 4.8

Life,
It's a long river
That runs touching both sides
One may be augmenting
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Parameswaran Nair Damodaran Nair
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Bharati Nayak 04 February 2022

Yes, our life is akin to that of a river.Such a beautiful poem.

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Dr. M. Asim Nehal 22 December 2021

Fabulous imagery. Life of a river is similar to ours.

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Thank you dear Dr.Asim Nehal. Life is survival of adversities like a river that faces flood and drought

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Rose Marie Juan-austin 21 December 2021

A wonderful poem that brilliantly depicts life. A poem of great depth embellished with images and metaphor. To my poem list.

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Thank you dear RMJ. Life instincts is so powerful that it takes it's course like a river despite distractions of many types

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Dr Dillip K Swain 21 December 2021

It's a beautiful comparison sir! It's like a river... you have directed your readers attention to its two sides. The little on life can be viewed from philosophical dimension. A perceptive poem....top score!

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Thank you dear Dr. Dillip. The life river flows incessantly regardless the floods and droughts. Magic of life

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