Life Cycles Comments

Sad truth for many spills in this marvelous poem.

like some unwanted child too late for an abortion was to be borne alone......wonderfully penned the birth recycling; beautiful poem shared

'she took to sneaking drinks a habit which displeased her both for its effects and taste yet eventually sleep would wrestle her in triumph onto the bed'... is such a thought provoking stanza. Enjoyed the poem.Congrats.

Powerful! Thanks for sharing and congratulations. : -)

perfect poem, dont spend time regretting

Excellent exploration of the type of habits and negativity accumulated over a lifetime that are so typical of the human condition...........money87

She realized she wasn't one of life's winners when she wasn't sure life to her was some dark...... impressive beginning. Thanks and congratulations for being chosen this poem as the modern poem of the poem of the da...........................money87

Excellent exploration of the type of habits and negativity accumulated over a lifetime that are so typical of the human condition.

She realized she wasn't one of life's winners when she wasn't sure life to her was some dark...... impressive beginning. Thanks and congratulations for being chosen this poem as the modern poem of the poem of the day.

she had so many private habits she would sometimes she always picked her nose when upset she liked to sit with silence in the dark../// beautiful expression

Habits! ! ! Effects. Thanks for sharing this poem with us.

When we realise too late in life that the pains we have been suffering is a result of our own negligences " like some unwanted child too late for an abortion"

Beautiful poem. However I have trouble relating the title with poem. It is so one sided.

This is really a beautiful philosophical poem on life having insightful inscriptions.

too often people give in to the difficulties of life. Exploring the deep dark corners of mind is the quality of a good poet.

Each life has its own share of challenges to be tackled which may cause frustration at times. The poem gives us a sneak peek of what these frustrations could mean and bring to us. Really an insightful poem. Thanks for sharing.