I’m Just his passing cloud
This comes to mind when alone
Life is cruel to have me found
By a man, heartless as stone
I reflected light into his darkness
When his life was a miserable well
Helped him fight nothingness
Fishing him out of his tainted shell
Now just a distressed sundew petal
My hopes are dying away little by little
My eyes have certainly deceived me
Of whatever, i must have believed to be...
A nice poetic imagination, Nisha. You may like to read my poem, Love and Lust. Thanks.
This poem of your shows that you are love struck! The poems is sensitive, emotional, sentimental and truthful lore. Yes love puts up on fame yet the same love may cut smile on the face..Love is a cradle for some but a hurdle to others. very painful expression of feelings. Le me doff the poet for drafting a poem like this.........................
I would also say please do not let your hopes die as said by Seema Chowdhury
please don't let your hopes die......... if it does all the world will end. just hang in there, its a phase that will pass by.
A passing cloud for him can still be a bright sun for the rest of the world. What fantastic poetry you write. Let the butterflies go on inspiring yourself
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
Very painful poem...