Introducinga Common God Poem by me poet yeps poet

Introducinga Common God

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(God's Request..Today's Special)

You all are absolutely right
God looks after you
when we all are out of his sight...
and
we are in may be plight!

Yes
In heaven alone
HE/SHE
Might

on mommy Earth
keep your bootlaces
yourself tight

the OLE man/ (woman)
heaven alone knows

... nowhere - -

NOT DISCOVERED
as yet

has 7.5 billion
plus more
+ add ons daily
to care for

coming from you
all earthly special ones
it's a

GLARE
none at Lovers like me
alone
now need to blankly Stare


Please kindly
for sake heavenly

Give GOD a long rest

He/(and why not She!)
must be tired too
watching all folks
like me and you

O God if you are somewhere
come (and wash our eyes)
if you
about us do
so much care

None about your real existence
to question
DARE

but all HUMANITY
still keeps you
in love and eternal care

You know why
since you alone are

LORD GOD
ONLY ONE
''COMMON''

any and every where

OMNI POTENT
OMNISCIENT
AND
OMNIPRESENT

Past Future and
of course Present

So all do spread perfume
and
ROSY essence/scent
he/she
will continue to
LOVE YOU

Introducinga Common God
Wednesday, May 2, 2018
Topic(s) of this poem: god,goddess,godspeed,love,poetic expression,prayers,readers,thoughts
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Kumarmani Mahakul 02 May 2018

Yes, fragrance of rose is symbol of immortality of soul and this has come from God. Akhtar Jawad has said the right thing. You have love for creator is great perspectives. Yes God looks after his creation. Nature obeys his command. Earth acts like mother for us. This poem is amazingly drafted and shared...10

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Sir I posted it twice...PH objected... so I have posted a poem... Kindly read it on GODS -TWO AKHTAR AND YOU

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My Dear Sir you are that ROSE in my garden of love and existence I am but a small human Trying to teach LOVE TO ALL Your Blessings are NEEDED...SIR you two above are my sole Gods I am a man with a woman's mind i.e. GENEROUS.and KIND.. I was born a man...BUT declared as a woman TO THE WHOLE WIDE WORLD... to keep away evil eyes.

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You Sir are that ROSE in my garden of love and existence... I am but a small human Trying to teach LOVE TO ALL Your Blessings are NEEDED...SIR you two above are my sole Gods

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Akhtar Jawad 02 May 2018

One who is thinking in you, in you is He, if you would have born as a beautiful female, it would have been a She. We think with a soul within us and this soul is God. Rose petal ie and dry but its fragrance is immortal. It has come from Him and it will go back to Him.

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SIR you two above are my sole Gods I am a man with a woman's mind i.e. GENEROUS... I was born a man...BUT declared as a woman TO THE WHOLE WIDE WORLD... to keep away evil eyes..FOURTH SON AND THE LAST CHILD 13TH ONE....

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Kelly Kurt 02 May 2018

I do not believe in any god. I am one of quadrillions of animals on this planet. So Ungodlike as to have no possible way of understanding such a hypothetical being. I will die soon. That is not a pleasant thought but is entirely accurate. So any anxiety involving that, is counterproductive.

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A very great and noble thought- - each one for himself- - we all have come....as a consequence of a conjugal act... to'' live and then die''- - both are inevitable. thanks for being the first one to so finely comment Sir KURT..May others follow too

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