If I Were A Bird Comments

" The endless would be my soaring" Great line

" The point of starting my flying would be the end of it" We will end at the very point from where we started Very beautiful poem with profound philosophy

Beautiful poem.........soar high....///////

Had I been a bird, I would fly in the sky, The huge sky of my dream, The point of starting my flying would be the end of it, The endless would be my soaring.

The poem presents a very fine imagery. But something has gone amiss. Things such as 'The point of starting my flying / would be the end of it' may confound the reader since the journey is stated to be 'endless'. Thanks for sharing.

Thats nice fly high and when u request some one to read your poetry since ur so younger add please or kindly It will add spice to ur request o brother/gc Ayan

the endless soaring in the heights of the vast space........ a great notion and an ideal and wonderful imagination. tony