What makes you always think
that God is a He?
For all that matter
He could be a child with a glee
or simply be a She!
If God is a child
Then he would be playing
with the clouds above
Every now and then looking
at us people fretting and slogging
He would laugh at our betises
and excuse our follies
For no heart can be
benevolent than a child's
He would hug us when we are deplorable
Smile at us when we are huffy
and deliver us from the atrocities.
For all that matter
It could simply be a She
A lovely lady who looks
At us as she dries her long hair
as we plod and trudge
She chuckles as we trip
She nurses us when we slip
and hugs us when we flip
For no heart can be kinder
than that of a woman
No eyes can be as forgiving as her's
She is the one who procreates
She could be the mother of us all.
God is a she The eternal mother despite the paternalistic attitude of men The Goddess still rules
what wonderful thoughts...intriguing...nice write... Ency Bearis
God is a personal experience, , you may have a Goddess if you wish so, ,
interesting...cute even when you play with the idea of the qualities of God including the joyful attributes of a child.
A lovely read, I think God can be whoever/whatever you want him/her to be, nice thoughts expressed here, 10 Lynda xx
I love the idea... though it is a long debate but doubts are something always catering the imagination of poets... keep it up... good work indeed
Subject is good... but prejudice is there... Still God is not my personal property, He or She I don't mind... :) I feel like this subject could have been handled much better...
what makes you think IF of course and we would all get a better deal, I have news for you when Eve ate of the apple tree, she slipped Adam a different fruit and matriarchy ruled for thirty milleniums, this is the best kept secret of Eden, 10+ for you lovely poem
female is the strongest creation in this world so the on who protects the whole world can definitely be a female. Withstands every thing but reacts vigorously when the time comes nice rhyming n nice poem god one
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
Amazing! Keep up the good work!