If All Men Were Black Comments
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True he was, ...Thanks Akhtar with your effort reading my work....much appreciated. I'm truly sorry for the late reply....I didn't see your comments until today.
Thanks Brian for being a reader of my poetry. I really appreciate every bit of your nice comments.
Dear Poet you know better yet- (just for me) Haiku contains syllable gradually = 5 + 7 + 5 but your Haiku has composed= 6 + 9 + 9
veins are wandering in wonder pitch through a thin abode through a life- yet my sight imprisons the flesh and skin.... vain activities of veins in this earth! great
Thanks for such wonderful additional thoughts on this poem... your comments is highly appreciated...
black and white are only pigments of skin and season and environment its the heart which for all is red open anyone's heart and see before one is dead love must measure up to the colour of red before guys are dead
Thanks dear poet force adding some spice to this poem... I appreciate your feedback
I understand your feelings. But there is no need to be white for those that are of pure heart, which has no color.
Your comments are highly appreciated... I like your insight, when said that, for those that are of pure heart
This haiku has vast meaning though it is concise. Here there is question in colour like black but often we find kind heart in a black body. Nice philosophical poem.10
Thanks my friend for noticing something good about this poem....your comments are highly appreciated, thanks
Absolutely brilliant! Brief and powerful expression! Appreciated...10
A beautiful heart hidden in any skin, may be black, yellow, brown or white, is the container of the true beauty. A great message in a great poem.
How I admire your positive contribution and insight to this message! Thanks again
If it wasn't colour we revel in fighting over we'd find another excuse, we seek problems where there are none and go on to create them.That is the Human in action.
True that..... maybe, we would be looking at who is more lighter than the other.. Thanks for your feedback....
Thanks Brian for your insight on this poem...and thanks for reading my work..
True that, Brian.....it's the mind set Thanks for reading my work.
Mandela was a political prisoner based on an ignorant policy. Racism is ignorant for we are all related from the first humans. Skin colour was caused by climate changing skin pigmentation.
Thanks for those insight....Skin colour was caused by climate which resulted in skin pigmentation.. Stay blessed
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3/13/2025 6:00:01 PM # 1.0.0
makes one think, thanks for this
Kunjalo Freedom, Kunjalo nje....Thanks for sharing your thoughts on this write.