If a rogue paintbrush clattered to the floor and happened to catch my eye,
I would lure it to my fingers with a palette smothered with rich, vivid paints
Luxurious hues and shades it would love
And rested in my light but commanding grip, I would let it unlock for me
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Amazing@@! ! ! ! You're my age and your doing this kinda thing! ! ! ! Awesome! @! ! ! ! 10 for you! ! ! wow! how long have you been writing? I've been writing to for five six months now :) - Peace!
Wow......now thats what i am talking about....you go girl.. well done...10++++
i love the metaphores they are great.i love ur decriptive talent too a 10 for sure.
you are truly inspiring, way beyond your years, the description with which you write is brilliant, i luv this poem, thanks for sharing