Ice cream,
Mount Everest of mine
When I was in nine.
Ice cream,
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A humerous and lovely poem on icecream.Yes, it is a craze for all, from child to .But age stands as a bar between you and icecream.This poem certainly fit to go to Bri Edwards' Showcase poems.
Please read 'from children to adults' in stead of 'from child to.' in the first line of the comment.(Poem Hunter has no provision for editing a comment)
A playful piece but life wisely told through his most favourite Ice Cream.How brilliant! Top Marks from me for this gem. TFS
Ice cream plays a nice role from childhood.Last stanza give a realistic touch.Nice..
Ice cream, Only dream of mine In night, move in dream vine. Ice cream Oh no! l am fifty nine Blood sugar is high, how to dine? .... oh! yes, blood sugar is high, how to dine. Wonderful imaginary. Beautifully painted. Enjoyed. Thanks.
It is an educative poem for children. Jonny Johnny, yes papa Eating sugar, no papa Can be replaced as a beautiful nursery rhymes.10
Ice cream, Only dream of mine In night, move in dream vine. Ice cream Oh no! l am fifty nine Blood sugar is high, how to dine? A wonderful poem, I loved it.
What becomes of youth and innocence? You've let the ice cream provide the explanation. This poem is a gem.
It shows the passion of the poet for ice-cream and then it becomes a anti-climax in the growing years. A longing nicely described- Ice cream.... Only friend of mine.
Just eat the ice cream. Everything will be fine.