Little Sunshine

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Tuesday, December 2, 2008

I Give Our Self This Chance... Comments

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i give our self this chance...

Tomorrow is mystery
No body knows what is going to happen
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Manonton Dalan 27 December 2015

yes there is happiness til the end of time

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Anjali Sinha 14 December 2008

awhhhhh cho cheeeeeeeewt my lil princess so nice to see you in love again-- Shayne you lucky guy haaaaaan keep my princess happy love u dear A+++ anjali

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<font color =fusha>Amy 13 December 2008

i love this poem really makes you think 10!

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Mark Nwagwu 12 December 2008

Go ahead, hataw, fall in love; if you fall, you'll get up again, and fall again in love; it is a never-ending battle of rise and fall, the better part is the fall. And your write says it all, so lovingly.

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Aijaz Asif 08 December 2008

a very beautiful write indeed with lots of yearns....thanks 10 rgds asif

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Sulaiman Mohd Yusof 05 December 2008

Give him a chance. May Shayne lives in yer heart forever, Well done Hataw.

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Serenity Prayer 04 December 2008

beautifully written. fanastic job. kinda sad, but good.

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Ency Bearis 03 December 2008

nice poem and message to your soul mate..poignant and written deep in you heart..lovely...A10 Ency Bearis

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Andrew mark Wilkinson 03 December 2008

well what a lucky guy Hataw, always wonderful falling in love... Andy 10

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<font color=black>Nagourta 02 December 2008

:) good. It appears you have found happiness. Interesting how poets can put emotions felt by so many so perfectly and simply. A good read, this is one of your better poems, and that is saying something...

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Yasser Koor 02 December 2008

it is good to feel like that way he will tell u that he will prove love 4 u. he will share ut love, , , .. that time between lover it is important...this chance, , , between lovers.., , nice poem it is touching my heart.... good poem and great work it is art

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