Obed dela Cruz

Obed dela Cruz

Marikina City
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Obed dela Cruz
Marikina City
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Tuesday, July 21, 2009

I Don'T Want To Be Down Forever Comments

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On my feet I will stand
With wings spread, I will hover fast
And fly high. I don’t want to be a loser,
But a winner, so I will soar.
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Tonia Nkeangnyi 10 August 2009

amazing poem. that's the best spirit to have when the going gets tough

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Isaac Maliya 08 August 2009

Nice inspiring poem! Time to take a decision and be happy!

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Silent Speaker 02 August 2009

LOVE LOVE LOVE a wonderful poem -Erika

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Sherrie Tappenden 01 August 2009

a really uplifting poem. the first verse especially fills one with the joy of stretching, reaching. using feet, wings and heart to catch your dream.

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Merna Ibrahim 30 July 2009

A strong determination and will......well written...10. Merna

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Obinna Eruchie 27 July 2009

Forever you will be a winner, hovering up in the sky. Interesting piece.

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dr veenaa rai 27 July 2009

what a determination to reach the skies, , , u will touch it....good work 10

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Antonio Liao 26 July 2009

wow....a hubble poem of wish....that's a good mind set.....very positive and God is the center of hope.....perfect dream of truth and God as part of plan of life....God bless.....a 10 +

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Ency Bearis 26 July 2009

a good determination...a nice ambition...well written... (Just don't go down abruptly as it hurts...do it steps by steps to high up and slowly to go down..)

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Catrina Heart 26 July 2009

Faith and confidence goes together...nice and lovely poem! ! ! Thanks.......

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don’t want to be a coward. one should never be coward andmere spectator too.. good resolve for human being....10 u bemy good friend.. read mine cowardice act.... mere spectator

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Obed dela Cruz

Obed dela Cruz

Marikina City
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