I Am Sleepless Comments

A Great Poem In Many Respects-A Nice Poem If i may make a suggestion-a different word choice could change or amplify the mood of this poem. Like replacing Frightened with terrified or numb with fear :)

I have read the three poems that you asked me to and find them very deep and personal. I am sleepless I wasn`t sure whether to see it as a partner having left or having died. But either way a thought provoking poem. I think you must be the most prolific poet I have come across! Keep up the good work and Best Wishes

This is such a sad story but true for many. When one is in deep misery sleep is almost impossible. May your dreams come back soon :)

the sleepless heart in anguish... very good!

Well penned poem..great poem Hasmukh...liked it.

A great write. Like it a great poem.