Mehta Hasmukh Amathaal

Mehta Hasmukh Amathaal

Vadali, Dist: - sabarkantha, Gujarat, India
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Mehta Hasmukh Amathaal
Vadali, Dist: - sabarkantha, Gujarat, India
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Saturday, January 28, 2012

I Am Sleepless Comments

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I have sleepless nights
I think a lot but nothing seems right
Dark clouds appear in the sky
I wonder why I feel shy
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Mehta Hasmukh Amathaal
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Crimson Soul 10 February 2012

A Great Poem In Many Respects-A Nice Poem If i may make a suggestion-a different word choice could change or amplify the mood of this poem. Like replacing Frightened with terrified or numb with fear :)

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George Bernard Hough 04 February 2012

I have read the three poems that you asked me to and find them very deep and personal. I am sleepless I wasn`t sure whether to see it as a partner having left or having died. But either way a thought provoking poem. I think you must be the most prolific poet I have come across! Keep up the good work and Best Wishes

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Lenore Lee 29 January 2012

This is such a sad story but true for many. When one is in deep misery sleep is almost impossible. May your dreams come back soon :)

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Eric Cockrell 29 January 2012

the sleepless heart in anguish... very good!

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Siyabonga A Nxumalo 28 January 2012

Well penned poem..great poem Hasmukh...liked it.

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Dave Walker 28 January 2012

A great write. Like it a great poem.

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathaal

Mehta Hasmukh Amathaal

Vadali, Dist: - sabarkantha, Gujarat, India
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Mehta Hasmukh Amathaal
Vadali, Dist: - sabarkantha, Gujarat, India
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