i would like to die a man
with smiles and laughter
till death in my mouth
i would like to die
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that touched me so much i felt a droplet of salty water on the cheek running down
Congratulations This is one of your best poems Here you express your feelings And you are letting them out That is a good sign Because it shows the You are learning about your feelings And finding out the type of person you are You know what you want You seem to me to be honest You are a happy person
Interesting piece Hamid about an even more interesting subject. Dying young and in a blaze of glory is to immortalise or freeze your youth in the memories of people who know you. Take care
Achilles made the choice of dying when he was yet young and full of glory. However in man there's also a different feeling, more intimate and elegiac, about this matter.
firstly i would like to thank you for allowing me the pleasure of reading ur pieces.this is amazing, beautiful.wow its inspiring
Beautiful. I love the sentiment you express in this poem. =) Effie.
I will like to die a man to ever be remembered, after reading your lines, I'll always remember how I want to die... Nicely written poem.