Lawrence S. Pertillar

Lawrence S. Pertillar

Connecticut
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Lawrence S. Pertillar
Connecticut
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Saturday, March 29, 2008

Hoping To Get A Quick Fix Of 'What Ifs' Comments

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Under the shadow of those shallow,
They follow.
Loyal and addicted.
A sickness they have lived with.
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The first lines had me.... loyal and addicted. Er.... (ticks in boxes) . t x

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Scarlett Treat 29 March 2008

What a sharp, two-edged line that is - They are hoping still to get a wuick fix of 'what ifs.' Powerful commentary on our world today...

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Lawrence S. Pertillar

Lawrence S. Pertillar

Connecticut
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