Friday, August 18, 2017

Hope Comments

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If hope were a knotted stick of wood
its gnarled length the difference between
my reach and my grasp, I'd lean upon it
with all my heart's unmeasured dreams.
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Seamus O' Brian
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Captain Cur 29 August 2017

Excellently composed and delivered. The use of the knotted stick and staff symbolizing both hope and inner wisdom. Life's journey, at times dull and fruitless, holds such immense promise as the reader wanders in and out of these marvelous lines.

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Kumarmani Mahakul 19 August 2017

If my life is the dust unsettled from the crooks and jags of this stony path unlikely infused with the breath of God..: Such beautiful lines bring devotion and deepness for God. From starting to ending every line values more here. About life this carries philosophy and we find heaven within. An amazing sharing is done here.10

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Rini Shibu 18 August 2017

Wow beautiful lines Seamus Lean upon the hearts unmeasured dreams.

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Seamus O' Brian

Seamus O' Brian

Galway, Ireland
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