Homeless Comments

uh-uh! Cannot use that last rhyme (you would have to pronounce it homeLESS) I believe Alexander nailed the meaning pretty well.. no? pretty good stuff

Thanks for commenting on my poem. You touchingly presented the homelessness of a housewife who bridges her kitchen with the fridge and ends her life. But was she homeless?

Well thought out poem elegantly embellished in poetic rhyme and rhythm. A beautiful creation. Thanks for sharing Ezra.

So deep poetry.. Keep it up... I would like you read my poem In the mid of the night depression you are killing me too.. Naila

Loved the last line of the poem. Keep it up.