Friday, June 1, 2012

Hidden Memories Comments

Rating: 4.8

In the dungeons of your mind
your trying to lock away and hide memories
of your life
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Dave Alan Walker
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Eric Cockrell 02 June 2012

you have to lt it go, or it owns you! good poem.

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Kasia Fedyk 01 June 2012

Dave, so beautiful and so very true! Divine Blessings. Love and Light.

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Marieta Maglas 01 June 2012

This is a very good poem of awakening.God bless.

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Heather Wilson 01 June 2012

Never hold onto pain if there is an alternative, good moto. sadly pain does rule many peoples lives, a good one.

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Unwritten Soul 01 June 2012

Those dark star is blackening the sky Could be the light is not reside in it's shine again Swimming in the spaces and diffuse sorrows But the sun is rising soon to heal the misery and left the dark star lost in a bright ville a ville of hope, trust and sanity after hidden memories lost it mysteries_Unwritten Soul

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Gajanan Mishra 01 June 2012

Fine poem. There is a saying - Where there is pain there is gain. I love it. Thanks ' Yours Gajanan Mishra

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