.haiku By Adeline Comments

Nice haikus, Adeline. Very nice wording!

great work; I will get time for reading all your attractive poetry adding you to my list as friend to remember to read

Trees shedding their leaves and leaving a carpet under the trees. Very soothing and mellowed write. Rain falling and sometimes the sun takes a peek. Loved this.

the first one i love, the second one i don't understand (what does into my progress mean? ?) , and the third one i don't care for but at least i might understand what you mean (is a car driving down a highway, passing lots of big trucks which shade the car with each passing?) . thanks for sharing. the first one made up for the others.

A nice series of haikus Adeline. Each one carries a message

October’s fingers... This one caught my eye the most... you've managed to blend a perfect metaphor into such a few lines... outstanding Haiku

Nice set of Haikus... Terry

Maestro..in Haiku tenner ~ niv PS Please comment on Bliss regards ~ niv

Haiku-do of yours is so masterly: vivid, alive, metaphorical. I enjoy it – and follow your 'do'.)

Fall changes entire landscapes. Rain’s a part of life that we must deal with. And “let the truckers have their day.” I enjoyed your haiku very much. Good job.

These pieces are both simply stunning Adeline and so skilfully written. I am in awe! 10 Karin Anderson

Wonderful October. Tim

Seductive and skillful...

evokes the fleeting beauty of nature responded with distinctive sensitivity of a poet... lovely

I hear echoe there Can it be in japanese? It is hard to write

and when the carpet is laid walk and let the show begin.