.haiku By Adeline Poem by Adeline Foster

Adeline Foster

Adeline Foster

Instructor of poetry, Hagerstown, MD
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.haiku By Adeline

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October's fingers
Slip the golden gowns of trees
To woodland carpet

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Life slips gently
Across the silken day
I'm not ready
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A curtain of rain
Relentless, daring spume feeds
Into my progress

Miles of black-top loom
Shadows block the burning sun
Semi-trucks rally

Sunday, December 16, 2007
Topic(s) of this poem: autumn,humor,travel
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Roland Bastien 17 June 2008

I hear echoe there Can it be in japanese? It is hard to write

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Estrella Baldemosa 20 June 2008

evokes the fleeting beauty of nature responded with distinctive sensitivity of a poet... lovely

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Sue Ann Simar 22 June 2008

Seductive and skillful...

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Wonderful October. Tim

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These pieces are both simply stunning Adeline and so skilfully written. I am in awe! 10 Karin Anderson

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Sana Ghostana 28 June 2014

Nice haikus, Adeline. Very nice wording!

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Lee Mack 27 December 2013

great work; I will get time for reading all your attractive poetry adding you to my list as friend to remember to read

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Patricia Grantham 17 December 2013

Trees shedding their leaves and leaving a carpet under the trees. Very soothing and mellowed write. Rain falling and sometimes the sun takes a peek. Loved this.

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Bri Edwards 12 July 2013

the first one i love, the second one i don't understand (what does into my progress mean? ?) , and the third one i don't care for but at least i might understand what you mean (is a car driving down a highway, passing lots of big trucks which shade the car with each passing?) . thanks for sharing. the first one made up for the others.

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Heather Wilkins 24 May 2013

A nice series of haikus Adeline. Each one carries a message

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Adeline Foster

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Instructor of poetry, Hagerstown, MD
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