Haiku-6 Comments

Delightful piece.....like it very much....

A perfumed haiku...loved it dear poetess. Top score!

Ah, , , , I can smell the scent of mango blossoms whispering in the gentle breeze and I yearn for past times I smelled the scent... very evocative... your voice is so soft and gentle

i'm guessing that this, from Glen, answers Loke Kok Yee's AND MY question about the meaning of the last line: ah! to be interrupted from this moment of enjoyment. but at least you had that moment.. i do not write 'haiku' poems. it seems to me i read once that a/an haiku does NOT contain complete sentences. i have also read that traditions change over years and haiku is no exception. whether haiku is meant to not have OR have.......one or more complete sentences, i LIKE THE POEM. and given Glen's interpretation of the third line, i send this to MyPoemList. bri ;)

Someone calls behind! Thanks for sharing this poem with us.

I can smell the fragrance of spring so clearly presented, but I was a little stumped by the last line, can you help me there Bharati?

Good haiku about spring

ah! to be interrupted from this moment of enjoyment. but at least you had that moment... i've never smelled mango blossoms. are they sweet? right now in my neighborhood the air is scented with desert willow, mimosa, and chocolate flowers- all wonderfully sweet. -glen

A call of nature can not be ignored, we become helpless. A nice Haiku.

Lovely! enjoying the Spring. The smell of the mangoes. breeze, its gentleness. all childhood memories for me. you are lucky to be in india enjoying the warm climate. God bless u Bharati

Season's provocative call? ....a good haiku indeed...thank you Bharati for this nice poem here

Fine and captivating depiction on spring with limited words. Thanks.

Someone calls behind! ! Thanks for sharing this poem with us.

Lovely! You are lucky to enjoy Spring. We are still stuck with below freezing Temperature and snowfall.