Goodbye, my former friend;
I fear this is the end.
I thought if you were wise,
you would apologize.
It's such a simple thing,
and doesn't hardly sting.
But too much time has passed,
so you can kiss my
friendship goodbye.
Excellent work! I laughed out loud at the implied, unfinished rhyme at the end. To my favorites and five stars!
Dear Ron, thank you. Did you know that HE also added this poem to HIS favorites? Yet he will not apologize.
I wrote something like this I got it published in England Bravo! ! ! !
Again Excellently expressed! .. Endless 10'S And Stars! ..+++++++++++++++++++++++
It can take me along time too, to finally see the truth. I think many can relate to this...
Sometimes I wonder why relationships are so ephemeral but then isn't life itself so transient? Sad reality!
Remorse and Forgiveness both are prized virtues. But most of us hesitate to develop and use.
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
Sorry that you have to go through this, Belle. I too have lost some friends for no apparent justifiable reason. That's when it hurts the most! Excellent poem!
Thanks very much, Richard. I consider YOU a good friend of mine, and hope you think the same of me,