~ Game Of Songs ~ Comments

well written and nice

standing opposite side by diving in to your song, , ........

I enjoyed the rhythm of this poem. The way it sways till the silent ending. Very interesting take on the subject. great work

Great poem, about lovers on opposites sides or far away. You really express love in a interesting way. Isn't love really a game of songs? Beatifully written and quite beautiful in the words you write.

In the dense darkness of Rapture-full silent night... i want to play such a game too if it is the result...an appeal to break the monotony n perish the longing....indeed a captivating write with words generating the ambience...for deep rooted feelings...more like a painting it is...with bold colors of dreaming a dream n concluding with the urgency to face n rejoice in the beyond.10++++ thanks sharing...

hey girl what do you think abou game and songs? But your poem is good.gud luck,

words help you picture your feelings more than its life size.10. shan

I've read this a second time... I have played this game.

it matters not the distance apart, only what comes out of your heart. so let him play the joys of that flute, as long as it brings him closer to you.

Game of songs with you Game of distance is, These are the games we play, games of life and games of love. And games of distant yearning.

The fragrance is quiet known, but the applied field is beyond expectation. You have efficiency in the poetic-kitchen as a poet-cook. Fantastic. It proves nothing new to be told on the earth, expressions only we can contribute as new. Except sacrificing a life, nothing could be more delicious as a gift than this writing. Reader may be much greedy to get such invitation though they are not John Knight, they have no such talent to ring the human heart by lyrical rhythm, yet...yet...yet.... Regards, 10++++++ Apoet

...Game of songs with you Game of distance is, Me in agony play flute All the time, ... words are floating with your feelings to make this beautiful piece...really a wonderful verse...Thanks

I'm sure he will come to you soon.

This last stanza has a different flow, and at the end you tell us who he is. [Thanks for sharing]

Aha ohhoo sure its very good [poem especially the title]… Indeed Niv you try to imbue in RNT and your adoption and adaptation is sincere and needs calorie burning and your work is grueling I can definitely feel… Thanks for helping Non-Bengali readers for getting flavor and gamut of magic of RNT When, O Dear yourself will come Take my flute to play, In the dense darkness of Rapture-full silent night Indeed touching the heart and elevating and tuning emotions at very high scale 10+++

a lovely poem is this..i enjoyed it alot

it has lyrical resonance about it...

''Take my flute to play'' very nice lyric poem, thank you for sharing.

Game of Songs - a wonderful title. Style too is nice. Enjoyable read. Thanks for sharing.

Simply wonderful Loved your title and last line “Rapture-full silent night” A true poet, keep writing.. ♥ Roza