I'm turbulent
My waves surge to reach out
To the roof of my mind
They crash at the shore
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I love this from start to finish, what amazing feeling, 'I'm vivid blue in daylight And dark as wine in the night' Now there's poetry at a fine moment Love duncan X
I like how you have brought out the inner changes in this poem! ....it's lovely! and a change for sure ~ Preets
DUELING WATERS...I LIKE IT, T.O....THIS IS A SOLID, AUTHOR CUSTOMIZED BEAUTY, MY DEAR! YOU GO WITH IT T. O.! ''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''FJR
TO...real deep ocean...i like the islands...and i like it that the colours are changing too...love...nalini
Very beautiful poem....excellent write...I love the Paradox. Hugs, Dee