Friday, October 30, 2015

Funny Girl Comments

Rating: 5.0

I was surprised today
To learn that the girl who made the room laugh
Is the saddest in insane pain.
Hospitals were no stranger to her
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Leah Ayliffe
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Hans Vr 16 November 2015

The story of the funny girl that is sad inside. Wonderfully and poetically written. If we cling to the past, whether it is a bright and clear one or a dark and gloomy one, we tend to forget that it is behind us, will never come back and cannot be changed like the wake of a boat. Maybe she needs a fantastic friend that helps her focus on her engine that drives the present towards a future that can be bright.

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Ratnakar Mandlik 30 October 2015

Brave girl facing the slowly approaching death laughingly as if death itself is a fun. Wonderful write. Thanks for sharing.10 +

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