Forever Friends (Haiku) Comments

very good haiku poem.my wishes

End rhyme in a haiku, well done sir. It's amazing how much you've been able to fit into such a short format.

Sweet Haiku, all said in few words, which means a lot.

When we are young, we often think our friends will always stand beside us just as we stick by their side through thick and thin. Unfortunately, young people don't have enough experience to have the acumen to choose friends wisely. Hopefully they learn as the years come and go..

This affirmation of love is so pleasing! Sweet rhyming too! A cute haiku!

This affirmation of love is so pleasing....! Beautiful rhyming too! Short and cute Haiku!

A lovely Haiku! Short, sweet, expressive and powerful....10

True friendship so succinctly, and elegantly, presented. Magnificent, Howard!

gee, i didn't know you cared so much for me! can i borrow ten bucks? bri :)

Excellent senryu........10

Very nice artistic diction

Saying a lot in a few words. That's definitely your forte. The power of love is great and always dependable. Well done.

Simple and eloquent. Nicely done, my friend :)

Good lines, nicely written about being a true friend. Perfect. Thank you for sharing, RoseAnn

You have expressed so eloquently what it means to be a true friend, this write is a gem!

Well said to a friend, well rhymed too. A short beauty.