Shalom, shalom, my beloved
For your eyes only
Did I not traverse this far…
Crossing the mirage towards oasis
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Crossing the mirage towards oasis....beautiful lines....10 no thesis love was basis
Shalom, shalom, my beloved For your eyes only See what I will do……. Among the chenille petals in the pimpernel of your love Let me add my own among them So that when you caress the chervil bouquet The chartreuse will break the silence And then my heart will be one with your estoteric fragrance Wow...I'm simply speechless...superb write like always
What a timeless beauty this poem contains, that anyone at any period of time can borrow from you the style of expressions and the claims that bear the self confidence...
Strong, intense like a romantic whirlpool that captures the senses, dreamy like a cloud floating on the verdant green hills, passionate like a love poem should be..... Wow is my word.
Dear Anjali, Your work is so very much adorable that a wide smile was around my face as I was going through your poem.God bless you dear.Keep writing
Amazing in all sense...loved it...This is first time I have read ur poem..and i guess now i have to read more.. :) ...
cosmogony of the numberless stars lantern of ethereal light your panoramic smile. Nothing more is really required to write a poem. So beautifully u write l get simply fascinated. No criticism this time. Only adoration and appreciation.. Fantastic work well done. Eyes are not here...... Read the story of the title..
shalom shalom dear poet, I don't know if you understand Hebrew but this what I know would fit this poem 'MaTovu' or 'O HOW GOOD'... nice write... good job... keep it up!
MY EYES MAKE LOVE WITH YOUR POEM IT'S NOT A POEM BUT AN ANTHEM ANTHEM OF LOVE WITH PURENESS YOUR POEM CREATES A VIBRATION IN MY HEART. WONDERFUL CREATION
Wow. Not only for my eyes dear Anjali but for my heart also... Well done!
Pregnant with passion that engages the eyes and hightens the heartbeat of poetic satisfaction. Excellently expressed my friend.10+++++++++++++++++++++++
hi anju, u have written wonderful poem opening ur golden heart.the words are well selected and line well composed.the last para is really touching. Shalom, shalom, my beloved For your eyes only This is what I wish……. In the cosmogony of the numberless stars I wannabe that lantern of ethereal light The dazzling one among the brightest So that, in the dance of the festival of lights My heart will swing with enrapturous delight And my life will be one, with your panoramic smile.' voted10 for u surya
after a long time! wonderful poem., 'In the cosmogony of the numberless stars I wannabe that lantern of ethereal light The dazzling one among the brightest So that, in the dance of the festival of lights My heart will swing with enrapturous delight And my life will be one, with your panoramic smile.' awesome lines....amazing imagery. thank you.
Through cobbled dark blithering dreary alleys, your work shines through as always. I applaud once again.
Fantastic poem Anjali. I wannabe that lantern of ethereal light You write so nicely. Eyes having so great attraction... but eyes are not here. It is the eye of the mind.Your sensuousness reaches a height in your sublime expressions. I only felt that I was blind to see your talent..
The scent of (the) Jasmine in your love.... or I wannabe that lantern of ethereal light I have forgot when I have read in anyone's poem so beautiful lines... Fantastic lines, poetry oozing out of genuine passions... Ooffs. U write so marvellously..! ! ! ! ! ! ! !
This poem is very beautiful. If were ever to be married these would be the type of words I would want to hear. Bien!