Flowers 04 - Thumba Poem by Unnikrishnan Sivasankara Menon

Flowers 04 - Thumba

Rating: 5.0


Thumbappoo
a tiny white flower,
humble and unpretentious,
just the size of a grain
of cooked rice,
a symbol of peace
and eternal harmony.

The smallish
Thumba herb
announces
herself from afar
by her stark odour,
but the tiny flower
fairy-white
is sans fragrance,
sans music.

The simple blossom
has the shape
of a human foot
reminiscent of
the one that pushed
Emperor Mahabali
to the netherworld,
but now bows her head
in extreme humility,
at the tumultuous welcome
accorded by one and all
to the dethroned Emperor.

Flowers 04 - Thumba
POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
Poet's Note: (1) The botanical name of Thumba is Leucas Aspera. (2) Thumba flowers are of the size of cooked grain of rice. And the cooked rice looks so like Thumba flowers that we have our folk songs singing about " Thumbappoo rice" . (3) The Thumba plant is aromatic, though the smell could be a little pungent. But flowers are not. (4) The Thumba flower has a peculiar shape, that of a human foot. The rest is my poetic expression, and has reference to the famous story behind Onam. I think I need not recount it here. May be because of this resemblance, the Thumba flowers and it's inflorescence are excessively used in the Onam pookkalam and rituals.
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Evelyn Judy Buehler 14 September 2022

I enjoyed reading this very interesting and informative, well crafted poem.5 stars!

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Rebecca Navarre 15 January 2023

Definite Definite 5 Stars! ..++++++++++++++++++++++

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Rebecca Navarre 15 January 2023

And Thank you for sharing the notes too! ..

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Rebecca Navarre 15 January 2023

Ohhhhh, How heart moving and beautiful! ... With the imagery so wonderfully captured! ...

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Immensely grateful, Becca, dear poet.

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UNNIKRISHNAN Sivasankara Menon 16 September 2022

I had posted notes of gratitude to the comments by Rose Marie Juan Austin and Evelyn Judy Buehler. But they have vanished. Can anyone help?

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Rose Marie Juan-austin 14 September 2022

Liked the ultimate stanza. A wonderful story.

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Thank You Rose Marie, for the wonderful notes on the poem.

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However, before leaving Earth, the Emperor requests leave of the Lord to visit his subjects once a year. The Onam day is marked by His Visit and therefore, the celebrations.

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The very story behind celebration of Onam is intriguing. Emperor Mahabali ruled over the entire known world. Under his rule every citizen was happy and content. Then, the gods grew jealous of him and on their pleading, the Supreme God Mahavishnu banishes the Emperor to the netherworld.

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Unnikrishnan Sivasankara Menon

Unnikrishnan Sivasankara Menon

PUTHENCHIRA, KERALA, INDIA
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