Friday, April 3, 2009

* First Kiss-(Haiku) Comments

Rating: 3.1

Maybe ten or so.

Name and face vanished with time.
...
Read full text

Jim Norausky
Rate this poem:
COMMENTS

Brevity, the understatement is the mark of Jim's poems.

0 0 Reply
Jazib Kamalvi 20 June 2019

such a nice write, Jim Norausky. Read my poem Love and L u s t. Thanks

0 0 Reply
Susan Williams 17 April 2016

Precise. Proving brevity can wave a magic wand..

1 1 Reply
M Asim Nehal 31 January 2016

Superb one.....8

1 1 Reply
Rachel Butler 28 October 2009

'Maybe ten or so' Rachel Ann Butler

1 1 Reply

I think almost everyone has had one of these. Brings back memories, and that's what your poem does so well. Great job. 10/10 Karin Anderson

1 1 Reply

I got a real chuckle with this one! ! ! ! A ten....Love is in the air because Spring has sprung.If you get a chance please read my new poem written today titled Speak Of Love....or RAINBOW IN MOTION HAIKU which is my masterpiece.Thank you

1 1 Reply
Tsira Goge 03 April 2009

Jim, Life perfectly not repeated with memoirs.....10........ All the best, Tsira

1 1 Reply
Sandra Fowler 03 April 2009

Captivating. Memories are what make life worth living.10, my friend. Kind regards, Sandra

1 1 Reply
Close
Error Success