Wednesday, April 29, 2015

First Fallen Tooth Comments

Rating: 5.0

The other day early afternoon
Mya ran to me from our living room
Smiling broadly in tightfitting-teeth
Carrying the just fallen front tooth
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Tushar Ray
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Tushar Ray 10 May 2015

Reading your comments, I could feel you smiling on Mya's interactions and reactions with me. It was a lot of fun. thank you!

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Roseann Shawiak 30 April 2015

An excellent depiction of losing a first tooth, Tushar! You described Mya's exuberance fully, I could see her every step of the way as you told of the details with the tooth fairy. Beautiful poem, touching the heart gently, bringing a smile to my face while reading it, Tushar. Great poem, give you 10 -10's if I could. Thank you for sharing it, RoseAnn

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Tushar Ray

Kolkata, India
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