Feel In Hot Arms, His Marvel On It. Comments

Bahut khoobsoorat......................................................................

Muhabbat ko agar hona ho ho jati hay baton mein, Kaho apni suno meri kabhi jago to raton mein. Wah! Wah! Kya khoob likha hai aapne.

Akhtar Vai - I'm amazed with these lovely description of love.. they are heart touching. Yeh khushboo hay yeh naghma hay yeh shokhi hay yeh aadat hay, .... Baah! !

Seeing the first lines, I gave up! Only later I saw its beautiful translation! A great write! 'You love me; I love you, a bliss top listed, ' What more is needed! From the Garden of Eden, let this love flow down to countless generations!

beautiful, a pleasure to read

beauty..... Muhabbat ko agar hona ho ho jati hay baton mein, Kaho apni suno meri kabhi jago to raton mein. i loved this poem! ! ! :)