Saturday, October 6, 2012

Empty Nest Comments

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Drifting in the regions of mind deeper and deeper
Encountering untouched and unexplored thoughts
Rising and falling like sand dunes of Sahara.
I imagine myself alone in the desert
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Savita Tyagi
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Kumarmani Mahakul 29 April 2018

The regions of mind is drifted deeper and deeper inside emotion and perception. Empty nest has left you scrambling and stumbling like a little child. This provokes thought. Children go in their own way for performing duties. Parents remain in nest and feel this as empty. You have shared deep emotion and wonderful thoughts. This is an outstanding poem definitely...10

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Valsa George 10 July 2013

Yes, when children leave for college and we are left alone, especially after 50, we feel so lonely and the empty nest in the first few months lies so silent! This is exactly what I felt when both my sons left for colleges far away! Then writing poems turns a great diversion! I can connect myself with these thoughts!

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Neela Nath Das 07 October 2012

A wonderful thought. Thanks for giving your thought such a nice shape!

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