Friday, October 3, 2008

Empty Heart's Shadows Comments

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Keep my love safe and warm dont
let anyone touch the part that only
belongs to you with a hidden
door inwhich we each have a key
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Bonnie Collins
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Frank James Ryan Jr...fjr 14 October 2008

Impressive stanzaec structure....mellifluous movement throughout...and Bonnie lass, i do believe you have a productive penchant for passsion's pour. Very Nicely Done, young lady! ~ F j R ~ __2008__

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Frank James Ryan Jr...fjr 14 October 2008

Impressive stanzaec structure....mellifluous movement throughout...and Bonnie lass, i do believe you have a productive penchant for passsion's pour. Very Nicely Done, young lady! ~ F j R ~ __2008__

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Andrew Blakemore 08 October 2008

A love poem of the greatest quality Bonnie. Your work is always so touching and heartfelt. Love, Andrew x

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Stacey Watts 03 October 2008

Wow another wonderful piece from you as always your words pour into love on the paper.. Very good read.

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Middletown New York
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