Emptiness Poem by Laura Rodriguez

Laura Rodriguez

Laura Rodriguez

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Emptiness

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This emptyness inside of me,
what could it mean?
Something's missing,
though I don't know why.
I can't feel my pulse anymore,
I can't hear my heart beat,
I can't feel my body at all.
What have you done to me?

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Mona Martinez 29 November 2009

very well expressed. true meaning of emptyness. you said it best, in less words.

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