Doctor, My Foot Poem by Kim Barney

Kim Barney

Kim Barney

I was born in a bank - - my mother went there and made a deposit

Doctor, My Foot

There are those who may think I'm a wimp
and I'm starting to look like a blimp,
and I don't like to whine,
but is it a bad sign
when my foot doctor walks with a limp?

Doctor, My Foot
Wednesday, April 29, 2020
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COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Grace Jessen 06 May 2020

Well done, Kim! What a twist that was! And where did you ever find that photo? It reminds me of some toes in my family.

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Kim Barney 07 May 2020

Thanks for the comment. I have had that picture in my computer files for a long time. Years ago I posted a poem about my sister called " Web-Toed Woman" and I THINK this is the picture I posted with that poem.

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S.zaynab Kamoonpuri 03 May 2020

Witty fantastic word play in super Limerick. I enjoyed this one too as well as your newest. Pls Pleez do read and comment my newest prose titled, ' miraculous birds witnessed in sacred sanctuary"

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Kim Barney 07 May 2020

Thank you for your comment. I have now read and commented on your poem. Thanks for the invitation.

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I was born in a bank - - my mother went there and made a deposit
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