And God said
“Let there be light”
And there was light
To conquer the darkness
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beautifully expressed the essence of diwali....a wonderful poem ma'm..10
A well written piece Sandra, though I expected some twist at the end throwing light upon the mindless noise and air pollution that is such an integral part of the festival.
Hello Sandra your poem is superb..but Diwali is foreign to me, but if it is from the same God who said 'Let there be light ' and it was so... then you must be very blessed Fond regards Alf
Sandra, this paints a beautiful picture of love and harmony and the celebration of a festival light is written so well in this poem. 10 love Karin
This is a well written and expressed poem about the 'Festival of Light, ' Sandra, and it gave interesting details on this celebration in every verse. Once again, you have displayed an exceptional poetic talent in this appealing write. Carl.
A lovely piece, Sandra. Very well written. The glow of the 'festive spirit' (as previously mentioned) comes through warmly through the words. And the cross-cultural reference in the opening lines adds depth and a further dimension to its meaning. :)
good Diwali poem...extends and expresses the festive spirit in beautifully worded lines...thanks...10
Experience expressed through rejoicing of festival of lights is very nice to read!
A very happy diwali to you and your family, may the years ahead bring peace, happiness good health and prosperity to all. poem as usual is very good
Thank you very much Sandra....doesn't it show how essential rituals are for social harmony....thanks again
thanks...a bright happiness i see in faces..a spakle in the eye of infants at the sight of those fire works in the sky
thnq, sandra...may every lamp lit dispel the darkness lurking in the invisible and visible chambers of the world...
A very good poem on Divali Sandra. Surprisingly too good a poem, beautiful, you could simply describe and define Divali just like that....wow