'Sokol loker majhe
Amar nijer mudradoshe
Ami aka hotechi alada? '
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Osadharon.. pain and lonliness is so alive in this poem. And you used great mythical allusions, which lifted the poem higher. Thank you. Happy kalipuja to you too :) May your life always be filled with light and you keep enlighten us with your poetry.
Thank you Sanjukta :) May you and I, and all members of poemhunter family keep enlightening each other :)
Feeling lonely remaining inside all people is so sad. But here wonderful expression of grief and little joy is observed with wise expression.10
bhalobasa r chobi tule dhareche tomar lekha... stay blessed... keep writing