Friday, December 26, 2014

Dining For Peace Comments

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Lyn Paul
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Hans Vr 09 January 2015

The hope and tranquility, transpiring from this poem gives the reader a warm feeling inside. Superb

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Kumarmani Mahakul 06 January 2015

Angelic voice, glorious food and meeting in calm mood let us think for establishment of peace. One fine day will definitely shine. Beautiful awareness poem shared.

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Hazel Durham 02 January 2015

Beautifully written Lyn with the spirit of goodwill to the human race with all hands creatively helping in bringing hope and peace to the world at a meal not just fit for a king but for everyone to rejoice! !

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Daniel Brick 01 January 2015

The title of this poem drew me to read it, There was something intriquing about the idea of a feast that serves the cause of peace. And what feast it was. An epic feast. I was reacting to the theme of gratitude that runs through your music poem and here it is again. I like the way this poem pays homage to those who are not present but contributed by some craft work they did. Like the woman who made the chairs. In recent years innovative banks have been giving loans to individuals like her who are amzingly productive and don't steal money to stash it away

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Ken E Hall 30 December 2014

A great meal of love for the world dining for peace sadly from times beginning somewhere in some land there is none...none the less poems that shout out are the best, , ,10+ regards and HNY! ...ps the 99 is to keep out the creeps doesn't work.

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Valsa George 29 December 2014

Peace and fraternity are what we all crave for in these troubled times! Let us sit together forgetting all differences of color, religion and nationality and partake of a meal prepared by many and strengthen our efforts for peace and fellowship! Great message!

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Kumarmani Mahakul 28 December 2014

Let us hear about angelic voice about one day peace to last ever. Wonderful and beautiful poem of awareness. Great work.

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