Saturday, November 25, 2006

Didn'T Do A Slow Burn Early Comments

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I saw a Bluejay in November.
Chest puffed and looking out of place.
I saw 'it' look through my front window
And in the backyard 'it' sat on the fence!
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Lawrence S. Pertillar
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Donna Nimmo 26 November 2006

You are a very talented writer. I really don't consider myself that great of writer but i really enjoy reading yours. Warmest Regards, Donna

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Lawrence S. Pertillar

Lawrence S. Pertillar

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