Friday, December 14, 2007

Darkness Comments

Rating: 4.8

When darkness sets in i am so alone
I have no where to go, no one to love me as deep as he did
He left my side, leaving tears of pain in my eyes
I still sit here today and cry
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Kasi Navadomskis
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Keith Hendrickson 19 June 2009

this is probably my favorite one so far. it reminds me of a few of my pieces. if you get a chance to read them i hope you enjoy my work as much as i enjoy yours...

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love would rise again. and things would be better! !

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Carissa Mcbride 25 September 2008

guys are only good for one thing and there usually not that good at that.

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~ Jon London ~ 07 June 2008

Intense emotional write, .......deep expression, opens a door to a world of darkness that craves the light........amazing piece keep expressing '10 Jon

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Sulaiman Mohd Yusof 08 April 2008

you 'll find the ray of light in the end of....................

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Emo Seb 04 March 2008

wow...its like yer writing my thoughts, man! ! ! killer poem! <3 Seb

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Sarah Jane Massie 19 December 2007

beautiful! is it about mike as well? because we both need to realize hes a weirdo. and not worth our time!

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Kasi Navadomskis

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