Thursday, March 20, 2025

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The sun is up again, the cameras follow suit,
Another daily episode in your scripted life,
Wake up, make up, kiss it up to others,
You wonder, what shade shall it be today?
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Zara Akioya
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Frankline Shem O. 22 April 2025

This is really clever—love how you used makeup as a metaphor for hiding emotions. The ending is powerful, especially the line about the mirror not judging. Maybe just smooth out the middle a bit so it flows better, but overall, great job!

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