Linda Ori

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Friday, December 22, 2006

Christmas Blues Comments

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The tree stands in the corner
Adorned with sparkling lights,
Beneath the tree are presents
Wrapped on many sleepless nights;
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jack russell 05 January 2007

This trips along beautifully, Linda :) Such a pity that you seem to be taken for granted: (I can only hope that this is your muse performing; and performing perfectly it is - as usual. I hope you had a wonderful time, at least with your friend, the tree :) Best wishes. jack.

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Geoff Warden 26 December 2006

A well depict insight unto 'he blues of hustle bustle of season.....Well Done

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Raghavan Warrier 25 December 2006

Well extremes co-exist in this poem of yours and beautifully expressed too. I liked the silent participation of the tree in the poem.

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Diane Violet 22 December 2006

Linda, well expressed and yes it's time to have some fun! All the best to you and yours, Merry Christmas, Diane

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Ulrike Gerbig 22 December 2006

well, i am absolutely with you on that one! ! ! well done and well written! thanks for sharing. ulrike

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Not a member No 4 22 December 2006

Real world emotions - they're always a mixture - very well expressed Linda. It probably brings as much sadness as joy and we all need to be true to ourselves. Thanks for a poetic but balanced take on Xmas. jim

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Frank James Ryan Jr...fjr 22 December 2006

WoooooooooosH! ...From one end of the emotional pole to the other, all in a score or so of verses....Forget the gift, whether useful or useless...its noy about you & its not about me & God knows how hippocritical, i may be by saying this...'Tis true though, Midnight...So take joy from the tree & all the late nights, because it was your good Christmas Spirit that motivated you to do all & one of it..And do enjoy, this once a year panic, because you know that you'd miss it if next year they said that Christmas was being waved! Merry Christmas, Linda! P.S.AWESOME WRITE frank

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