Chocolate And Vanilla, Nice Dream Poem by Hebert Logerie

Chocolate And Vanilla, Nice Dream

Rating: 4.6


A beautiful Sunday afternoon
Amid the estival breeze of a silent moon
You and I did enjoy a few scoops
Of our favorite dessert; oops, oops
We hugged, kissed and teased each other
And uneventfully realized when mixed together
Chocolate and vanilla esthetically are wonderful
Miraculous, incredible, visual and sensual.

Voluminous kisses, voluptuous hugs
Velvety waves and intermittent moaning
Of ecstasy until the next morning
Surprisingly, mosquitoes and bugs
Stayed away, where we became one
Darling! We do know how to have fun
Chocolate and vanilla are two vital ingredients
That nourished bodies and soul, soil and plants.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Deborah Cromer 02 August 2009

After reading your title, the body of the poem definately was not what I expected. You added some sensual touches of the personal nature. Your invite to read this, was the cherry on top. I'm a frozen yogurt girl. :) Thanks for sharing! The togetherness of your poem and the enjoyment of difference was creative. DC

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<font color =fusha>Amy 02 August 2009

A stuunning poem with a well deserved ten :)

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Colin J... 02 August 2009

Long Live Love... Colin J...

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Isaac Maliya 02 August 2009

A great poem of love and its physical bliss! I give a 10++

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Gayle Anne Goff 02 August 2009

VERY BEAUITFUL ANOTHER 10 FOR YOU. I LOVE ALL YOUR POEMS EACH SUPRIZES YOU. EVERY ONE LOVES'' CHOCOLATE'' AND WHAT GOES BEST WITH IT; '' VANILLA''

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Chinedu Dike 23 February 2017

The is sheer romance in its most sublime. Exquisite! Elegant! Seductive! Beautiful! ... Remain blessed.

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Dwi Utami 12 July 2010

He.he.he: p good creation of you, : 10x10=100% point for you.

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Lucas Akkadian 19 September 2009

You created a very warm, inviting atmosphere, and a smooth style of words with this write. Nicely done

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Chamekka Jones 18 September 2009

OHHH! LA! LA! I CAN TASTE IT! =D

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Christopher Montalvo 23 August 2009

I really love this poem, could never have one without the other,10/10! Another favorite added to my list

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